Story Grid Writing Podcast

First Draft Feedback: 3 Editors Give Honest Writing Analysis - Part 2

Jul 7, 2022

01:00:21

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Episode notes

Introduction

3min

The Double Factor Problem in Sherlock Holmes

4min

The Double Factor in a Murder

5min

The Importance of Relationship With His Stepsons

2min

The Progression of a Crime Story

6min

How to Debate Double-Factor Problems

5min

The Red Herring: How to Make a Hero

2min

The Double Factor Problem on Stage Two

2min

The Double Factor Problem

4min

10.

The Importance of Knowing the Payoff of a Crime Story

4min

11.

The Power of Virtue and Value

6min

12.

How to Write a Short Story Without Iteration

5min

13.

The Importance of Understanding the Antagonist to Factor Problem

2min

14.

The Wizard of Earth Sea: A Masterwork Pattern

3min

15.

The Wizard of Earthsea Experiment

4min

16.

The Double Factorness of Justification in Justice

5min

Tim has written a first draft of his scene based on the in-depth analysis of Ed McBain's EYE WITNESS.

Listen in as Shawn, Danielle and Leslie give their feedback and start diving into the analysis of the first draft.

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