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First Draft Feedback: 3 Editors Give Honest Writing Analysis - Part 2

Story Grid Writing Podcast

CHAPTER

The Double Factor Problem on Stage Two

I think that what you were saying about when you said that Randall was just there at the wrong time, that really rang true for me too. So even the villain is dealing with double factor. Oh, I thought it was one way, but it actually isn't. There are people who are homeless, who are not on drugs, having a really difficult time of it,. And because of the good and goodness of their soul, they come forward after they've witnessed a crime. And I repay them by getting them killed.

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