First Draft Feedback: 3 Editors Give Honest Writing Analysis - Part 2
Story Grid Writing Podcast
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The Double Factor in a Murder
"I kept trying to figure out how to get this in the scene, and I couldn't come up with a good one," she said. "It needs to be something that this kid doing drugs is going to ruin his life in some way." She added: "What is personally so, so risky for him?"
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