The Shit No One Tells You About Writing How to Find The Hook in Your Book
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Sep 18, 2025 The hosts and Leslie dive into a YA dystopian query letter, discussing the essential elements that make a hook compelling. They debate the role of tension and stakes while emphasizing the importance of a strong Act One in storytelling. Feedback flows on character depth and the protagonist's drive in the plot. The focus sharpens on crafting an engaging opening, highlighting how the right starting point can enhance the story's impact. This lively discussion is a treasure trove for aspiring writers keen on refining their craft.
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Character-Goal-Obstacle Hook
- Use a clear character-goal-obstacle hook to open your query and drive curiosity.
- Frame the protagonist, their goal, and the obstacle in one sentence to sell tension quickly.
Use Situation Or 'In A World' Formulas
- Try the 'character situation complication' or 'in a world' formulas to convey worldbuilding and stakes concisely.
- Use these to make the world essential to the protagonist's desire and conflict.
Curiosity Beats Empathy In Queries
- A query must create curiosity, not just empathy or facts about the protagonist's life.
- Focus on power imbalances and pressures that force the protagonist to act.
