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How to Find The Hook in Your Book

The Shit No One Tells You About Writing

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First Pages Critique: Interiority and Opening

Leslie summarizes submitted pages; CeCe and Carly diagnose a weak opening—lack of interiority and wrong starting place—and advise showing the kid-centric world, clarifying ages, and choosing a disruption that grants agency.

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