Concrete vs. Abstract Curiosity

May 29, 2025

Kate Visser, author of the YA fantasy novel 'Stage of Shadows' and psychologist, shares her experiences with query writing and character development. She delves into the complexities of dual POV narratives, exploring character arcs and emotional depth. The discussion highlights the challenges of balancing ambitious concepts with reader engagement. Visser’s insights reveal how specific emotions and moral dilemmas enrich storytelling, while the hosts provide constructive feedback on enhancing narrative clarity and maintaining reader interest throughout the journey.

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ADVICE

Clarify Moira's Character Arc

Clarify Moira's character arc to engage readers fully.
Both protagonists must have distinct, compelling journeys in dual POV stories.

ADVICE

Shift Moira's Arc Earlier

Move key plot revelations earlier to strengthen Moira's arc.
Align dual protagonist arcs so both feel significant and propulsive.

INSIGHT

Abstract vs. Concrete Curiosity

Differentiate abstract curiosity and concrete curiosity in storytelling.
Prologues should seed concrete curiosity to engage readers effectively.

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In this special episode of Books with Hooks, author Kate Visser joins hosts Bianca, Carly and CeCe to share insights about her query letter for her YA fantasy novel, 'Stage of Shadows.' Carly and Cece dissect the strengths and weaknesses of Kate’s pitch, particularly focusing on character arcs, world-building, and the complexities of dual POV narratives. Carly and Cece provide constructive feedback, emphasizing the importance of clarity in storytelling and the need for the protagonist’s character arc to evolve throughout the narrative. The episode highlights the challenges of balancing ambitious concepts with reader engagement, offering valuable lessons for aspiring writers. Throughout the episode Kate offers insight into her character arcs, moral dilemmas, and the challenges of writing a compelling prologue. The hosts provide feedback on the emotional depth of her writing and the balance between abstract and concrete curiosity in storytelling.

Note: Carly Watters and CeCe Lyra are literary agents at P.S. Literary Agency, but their work on this podcast is not affiliated with the agency, and the views expressed by Carly and CeCe on this podcast are solely that of them as podcast co-hosts and do not necessarily reflect the views, opinions, policies, or position of P.S. Literary Agency.

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