The podcast discusses the critique of query letters and a book club romance, tips for improving line level writing, mistakes that make writing less polished, and building curiosity in your writing. They also interview debut author Elba Iris Pérez about winning a writing contest and her journey to publication. The role of houses in gothic novels, plot twists, and the power of setting are also explored.
Selecting a fitting title and tone that accurately represents the book's content and meets reader's expectations is crucial for success in publishing.
Preserving tension and curiosity in storytelling by strategically unfolding the plot and avoiding early revelation of major plot points can keep readers engaged.
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Summary of The Things We Didn't Know
The Things We Didn't Know is a cross-cultural coming-of-age debut novel by Elba Iris Perez. The story follows nine-year-old Andrea Rodriguez, who is taken by her mother from their home in a small Massachusetts factory town and sent to Puerto Rico with her brother. They are left with family members and promised their mother's return. However, the years pass and Andrea and Pablo are constantly shuttled between Puerto Rico and Warrenoco, struggling to fit into a rapidly changing town and navigate their cultural in-between. The novel explores their journey to adulthood, as they confront triumphs, heartache, and clashing family values. The Things We Didn't Know won the Simon & Schuster Books Like Us Contest, marking Perez's debut in publishing. Perez's journey to publication included taking online courses to develop her understanding of writing a novel, and after receiving feedback from an agent, she honed her skills before ultimately winning the contest and securing a publishing deal with Simon & Schuster.
The importance of nailing the title and tone
The podcast episode discusses the importance of selecting the right title and tone for a book. The speaker emphasizes that the chosen title should accurately represent the content and meet the expectations of readers and agents. They suggest that the initial title might not effectively convey the book's genre and tone and recommend refining it to better reflect the story. Additionally, the speaker suggests that the opening pages should focus less on backstory and more on setting the stage for the current timeline of the story.
Creating tension and curiosity in storytelling
During the discussion, the podcast highlights the significance of building tension and curiosity in storytelling. The speakers mention how important it is to preserve surprises and not reveal major plot points too soon. They give the example of leaking the tension in a love triangle storyline by disclosing crucial information early on, which diminishes the reader's curiosity and interest. The speakers encourage the writer to find ways to keep readers engaged and curious by unfolding the story more strategically, while also avoiding excessive reliance on italics for emphasis.
In today's Books with Hooks, Bianca, CeCe, and Carly critique an upmarket/southern-gothic query and a book club romance. They discuss a "perfect" first query paragraph; the importance of accurate framing in a query; when a content warning is necessary; tips for elevating your line level writing along with examples of sophisticated writing; writing protagonists' thoughts in a realistic way; mistakes writers make that make their writing appear less polished; and examples of how to build curiosity into your pages.
After which, Bianca interviews Elba Iris Pérez, debut author of The Things We Didn't Know. They discuss Elba's winning of the Simon and Schuster "Books Like Us" award and Elba's subsequent journey to publication; the benefit of taking writing courses; writing magazines as good resources for finding contests; immersing readers in scenes that are unfamiliar to them; and writing children in first person in a convincing manner.