Writing Excuses 19.12: A Close Reading on Voice - Red's Perspective - Muscular Prose
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Mar 24, 2024 
In this podcast, they do a close reading of Red's opening narration to analyze how voice communicates character and world effectively. They discuss drawing readers' attention to key details, suggest rewriting sentences from a work in progress, and provide writing tips. The hosts explore the impact of language on character and world-building, delve into Red's complex nature, and prioritize time and self-care. They also discuss free indirect speech, storytelling techniques, and crafting intriguing plot twists.
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Character and World Building
- The opening paragraphs of "Time War" efficiently convey character and world details.
- Red's enjoyment of carnage, her isolation, and the time war's impact are established quickly.
Repetition for Emphasis
- Use intentional repetition to emphasize important points.
- Repeating phrases draws the reader's attention.
Rhythm and Voice
- Varying sentence lengths creates rhythm and reflects Red's internal state.
- Short sentences for action, longer sentences for the time war's complexity.