Giving Characters Changing Wants and Needs to Fulfill Their Character Arcs
Jul 25, 2024
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Join Alison Espach, a creative writing professor and author of 'Notes on Your Sudden Disappearance,' as she discusses the art of crafting characters with evolving desires. She shares insights on the pitfalls of falling into repetitive writing patterns and the genre framing of her works. The conversation delves into the unique challenges of writing a fast-paced narrative versus one over an extended time, plus the significance of a single POV in her latest book, 'The Wedding People.' Get ready for a masterclass in character development and narrative strategy!
Characters should have evolving wants and needs to effectively drive plot development and fulfill their arcs.
Clarity and brevity in query letters are essential for capturing agents' attention, focusing on central conflicts rather than excessive detail.
Weaving humor into serious narratives can enhance emotional depth and relatability when executed with genuine dialogue and situational irony.
Deep dives
Upcoming Changes to Podcast Segments
The podcast will pause its 'Books with Hooks' segments over the summer to allow the hosts to recharge and return in the fall. Despite the hiatus, they plan to continue critiquing two new submissions each week, which will be shared with paid Substack subscribers through their newsletter. In the meantime, the hosts will replay episodes from their backlist while introducing new author interviews each week. This strategy aims to maintain engagement with their audience while also managing the production process effectively.
Writer's Query Letter Analysis
A guest author submitted a query letter detailing her debut women's fiction novel, which addresses psychological issues and the emotional challenges stemming from miscarriage and adoption. The hosts provided constructive feedback, suggesting the author reduce excessive psychological detail to make the letter more concise and focused on the main storyline. They emphasized the importance of quickly presenting the conflict rather than starting with the couple's desire to start a family. The hosts also noted the query letter's common trope of perfect lives disrupted by trauma and encouraged the author to highlight the unique aspects of her story.
Key Aspects of Writing Inquiry Letters
The podcast hosts stressed the importance of clarity and brevity in writing query letters to capture agents' attention. They advised eliminating unnecessary explanations, particularly around comp titles, which should suffice without extensive elaboration. The suggestion was made to directly tackle the central conflict immediately, as agents typically prefer to engage with the core emotional struggles upfront. This approach would enhance the letter's impact and convey the plot more effectively.
Engaging with Critique and Feedback
During the critique session, the hosts explored the significance of well-structured feedback, highlighting aspects such as point of view and narrative perspective. They encouraged the guest author to ensure clarity in whose perspective the story is being told from, emphasizing how head-hopping may confuse readers. The importance of keeping the reader engaged through a well-defined narrative thread was discussed, and they urged the author to consider what specific goals her protagonist might have. Creating a strong sense of what is at stake adds depth to the narrative, making it more compelling.
Balancing Humor with Serious Themes
The conversation turned to the challenge of weaving humor into a narrative that also explores deeper themes such as grief and loss. The podcast hosts recognized that humor might initially seem at odds with a serious subject but can provide a necessary balance when executed thoughtfully. They provided examples where humor emerged organically from character interactions and situational irony, highlighting the need for genuine and relatable dialogue to draw readers in. This nuanced approach enriches the overall reading experience and allows for a wide emotional range.
The Role of Setting and Characterization
The hosts discussed the portrayal of setting as a significant element influencing character development and plot progression. They noted how the environment can serve as a character in itself and emphasized the need for sensory details to immerse readers. Through Phoebe's perspective, the listeners were encouraged to engage not only with her thoughts but also to visualize her surroundings within the hotel and the events unfolding around her. This dynamic interplay between setting and character lends depth to the story, making it resonate strongly with the audience.
In today's Books with Hooks, we’re throwing it back to an early backlist segment.
After which, Bianca interviews creative writing professor, essayist, and author of Notes on Your Sudden Disappearance, Alison Espach. They discuss falling into the mode of writing the same sorts of novels repeatedly; the genre that Notes on Your Sudden Disappearance was pitched and marketed as; Alison's latest release, The Wedding People; writing a book that spanned a long period of time to one that spanned only a few days; writing a voicey third person POV; inciting incidents that happen off the page and that fuel curiosity; giving characters changing wants and needs and how that leads to plot points; and why Alison chose a single POV for The Wedding People.
Note: Carly Watters and CeCe Lyra are literary agents at P.S. Literary Agency, but their work on this podcast is not affiliated with the agency, and the views expressed by Carly and CeCe on this podcast are solely that of them as podcast co-hosts and do not necessarily reflect the views, opinions, policies, or position of P.S. Literary Agency.
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