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4 snips Jul 10, 2025
Discover the art of crafting impactful query letters as experts provide insights into commercial women's fiction. They delve into essential elements like character development and emotional stakes, helping writers catch agents' attention. Hear Harrison Brown's inspiring journey of transitioning and the challenges faced by transgender athletes. The conversation highlights the need for inclusivity in sports while emphasizing advocacy and visibility. Don't miss their practical tips on story hooks and how to connect deeply with readers.
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Understanding 'Familiar' in Queries
- The term 'familiar' describes when a story feels too common and lacks fresh uniqueness.
- Query letters must highlight what sets the story apart from familiar themes to capture agent interest.
Balance Emotion with Plot
- Use interiority and emotional tension alongside clear, compelling plot to engage readers.
- Show why a disruption matters to your protagonist to deepen reader curiosity and connect emotion with plot.
Clarify Present-Day Conflict
- Clearly articulate the present-day conflict in your query letter to sharpen story focus.
- Avoid vague descriptions like 'reconcile' or 'move forward' that dilute tension and stakes.