Story Grid Writing Podcast

First Draft Feedback: 3 Editors Give Honest Writing Analysis - Part 1

Jun 30, 2022

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Masterwork

04:25

I Love the Way You're Presenting the Events and the Dia

02:00

The Relationship Between Writers and Editors

01:50

Introduction

5min

The Relationship Between Editors and Editors

2min

What's the Goal of a Novel?

5min

The Relationship Between Writers and Editors

2min

What's the Focus on the Working Relationship?

3min

How Did You Write a Short Story From a McBain Eye Witness?

4min

Is This a Short Story?

4min

How Much Variation Did You Bring to Your Short Story?

2min

How to Write a Scene Based on Beat the Reaper?

3min

10.

The Ed. McBan Mexample of Eye Witness

2min

11.

I Love the Way You're Presenting the Events and the Dia

2min

12.

Masterwork

4min

13.

What Do You Think About the Protagonist?

2min

14.

Is This a Crime Story Featuring a Detective?

4min

15.

The Story Grid Nerdage - Is That the Bottom Line

2min

16.

Capelli and Watson - Is Capelli an Innocent?

2min

17.

Capelli Doesn't Have Responsibility, Struthers Does, and Randall Does

2min

18.

Was Watson a Homeless Guy?

2min

19.

What Kind of Internal Change Would Make Sense for Watson?

2min

20.

The New Sand, by Tim Watson

2min

21.

You're Playing a Covert Game

6min

Tim has written a first draft of his scene based on the in-depth analysis of Ed McBain's EYE WITNESS.

Listen in as Shawn, Danielle and Leslie give their initial feedback and start diving into the analysis of the first draft.

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