First Draft Feedback: 3 Editors Give Honest Writing Analysis

1

Introduction

00:00 • 5min

2

The Relationship Between Editors and Editors

04:39 • 2min

3

What's the Goal of a Novel?

07:04 • 5min

4

The Relationship Between Writers and Editors

12:00 • 2min

5

What's the Focus on the Working Relationship?

13:50 • 3min

6

How Did You Write a Short Story From a McBain Eye Witness?

16:29 • 4min

7

Is This a Short Story?

20:57 • 4min

8

How Much Variation Did You Bring to Your Short Story?

25:09 • 2min

9

How to Write a Scene Based on Beat the Reaper?

26:44 • 3min

10

The Ed. McBan Mexample of Eye Witness

29:32 • 2min

11

I Love the Way You're Presenting the Events and the Dia

31:35 • 2min

12

Masterwork

33:35 • 4min

13

What Do You Think About the Protagonist?

38:00 • 2min

14

Is This a Crime Story Featuring a Detective?

40:18 • 4min

15

The Story Grid Nerdage - Is That the Bottom Line

44:35 • 2min

16

Capelli and Watson - Is Capelli an Innocent?

46:18 • 2min

17

Capelli Doesn't Have Responsibility, Struthers Does, and Randall Does

47:50 • 2min

18

Was Watson a Homeless Guy?

49:43 • 2min

19

What Kind of Internal Change Would Make Sense for Watson?

52:04 • 2min

20

The New Sand, by Tim Watson

53:47 • 2min

21

You're Playing a Covert Game

56:02 • 6min

First Draft Feedback: 3 Editors Give Honest Writing Analysis - Part 1