Hero, Victim and Perpetrator: The Must-Have Relationships in Your Story
Story Grid Writing Podcast
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I Didn't Love Forged as That Verb in That First Sentence
I felt like he came in with his heels in the ground, and he was being pulled in by something else. And i feel like it's the guilt of the fact that he let the guy die is what ends up dragging him in. I just wanted to mention that, since you had brought up the opening, ah, but can you see how that's what you're creating in that? Then if you feel like a wedge is not what i was, not really what i want here, then how you could make adjustment so that she is being pulled rather than pushed.
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