
Your Next Draft
Supporting fiction writers doing the hard work of revising unputdownable novels. The novel editing process is the creative crucible where you discover the story you truly want to tell—and it can present some of the most challenging moments on your writing journey. Developmental editor and book coach Alice Sudlow will be your companion through the mess and magic of revision. You’ll get inspired by interviews with authors, editors, and coaches sharing their revision processes; gain practical tips from Alice’s editing practice; and hear what real revision truly requires as Alice workshops scenes-in-progress with writers. It’s all a quest to discover: How do you figure out what your story is truly about? How do you determine what form that story should take? And once you do, how do you shape the hundreds of thousands of words you've written into the story’s most refined and powerful form? If you’ve written a draft—or three—but are still searching for your story’s untapped potential, this is the podcast for you. Together, let’s dig into the difficult and delightful work of editing your next draft.
Latest episodes

Dec 12, 2023 • 24min
The Top 5 Editing Tips From Your Next Draft in 2023
Discover the top five editing tips from Your Next Draft in 2023. Learn about the importance of scenes in storytelling and writing great scenes. Find out how sending a plot treatment can improve the editing process. Understand the significance of having a clear point in writing. Don't forget to rate and review the podcast!

Dec 5, 2023 • 14min
My Biggest Takeaway From Coaching Writers in 2023
What dozens of manuscripts and dozens of writers all have in common.This weekend, I celebrated the one year anniversary of launching my editing business.And since the one year mark is a pretty major milestone, and we’re nearing the end of 2023, I’ve been looking back.I’ve edited dozens of novels and coached dozens of writers this year. And while the stories vary widely, there’s one theme I’ve encountered in them all—and it applies to your story, too.In this episode, I’m sharing what I’ve learned from a year of coaching writers and editing novels.You’ll hear:What new and experienced writers both have in commonWhy it’s helpful to you and me when I share everything I know about editing here on the podcastWhy all the writing craft resources in the world can’t put editors out of businessAnd more!It’s been a wonderful year of editing, full of amazing stories and equally amazing writers. And I can’t wait to see what 2024 has in store!Links mentioned in the episode:Want me to edit your novel? Reach out and tell me about your story: alicesudlow.com/contactSend me a Text Message!Want my support in your revision?In Story Clarity, we’ll work one-on-one to sharpen your story’s structure and craft a revision plan that works. If you’re ready for thoughtful, personalized feedback from an editor who gets what you’re trying to do, I’d love to hear what you’re working on.Get started by telling me about your story here. Support the showRate, Review, & Follow on Apple Podcasts "I love Alice and Your Next Draft." If that sounds like you, please consider rating and reviewing my show! This helps me support more writers through the mess—and joy—of the editing process. Click here, scroll to the bottom, tap the stars to rate, and select “Write a Review.” Then be sure to let me know what you loved most about the episode! Loving the show? Show your support with a monthly contribution »

Nov 28, 2023 • 21min
How to Make Sure Even Your "Slow" Scenes Keep Your Readers Hooked
Learn how to keep readers engaged in slower scenes of your novel by evaluating their necessity, editing them effectively, and incorporating conflict and action. Discover techniques for controlling information sharing to maximize reader engagement and transform slow scenes into exciting revelations. Find support and tips from a developmental editor to make your entire story un-put-down-able.

Nov 21, 2023 • 24min
How to Figure Out What Your Character REALLY Wants
Learn why it's crucial to show what the protagonist wants and its significance, exploring specific character goals and emotional connection, emphasizing a close relationship with mom, and uncovering deep character motivations.

Nov 14, 2023 • 30min
Behind the Scenes of a Deep Dive Manuscript Evaluation
The podcast explores the editing process of a manuscript, discussing the seven layers of analysis used for a developmental edit. It highlights the importance of time considerations in conveying the passage of time to the reader. The hosts also discuss the benefits of working with a developmental editor and give a recommendation for author J.D. Edwin's books.

Nov 7, 2023 • 21min
How to Flesh Out Flat Characters With Just 4 Questions
Discover how to flesh out flat characters and create a cast your readers will fall in love with. Learn the 4 essential questions to answer for richly-developed characters. Find out how to give side characters unique and memorable personalities. Explore the importance of delving into the backstory of side characters and understanding their decision-making process. Learn how to bring flat characters to life with goals, motivations, and interactions with other characters.

Oct 31, 2023 • 15min
The Most Important Principle When Choosing Your Point of View
Explore the complexity of selecting the appropriate point of view in writing and the impact it has on the story and reader's experience. Discover the challenges and benefits of embracing a point of view with no predefined limitations and rules. Dive deep into the use of third-person omniscient point of view, setting boundaries to enhance the narrative and avoiding overwhelming readers with excessive information.

Oct 24, 2023 • 19min
What NOT to Say to Your Developmental Editor
How to make the most of your editor’s feedback—even if you disagree with it.If you want to make the most of your editor’s feedback, there’s one phrase not to say.It’s natural. It’s normal. It’s something I’ve definitely said in other areas of my life.But when you’re collaborating with an editor to make your novel the best it can be, this phrase won’t help you.And in this episode, I’m sharing what this pesky phrase is and why it’s so dangerous.You’ll learn:One thing not to say to your editor—and what to say instead3 reasons why we want to say the wrong thingThe qualities my best editing clients all share (hint: it’s not about their story or their skill!)And more!If you’ve ever wondered how to make the most of working with an editor, this episode is for you. I hope it makes it a little easier—and more exciting!—to get an editor’s feedback.Links mentioned in this episode:Find out more about my editing: alicesudlow.comSee my editing services: alicesudlow.com/servicesSee whether I’m a good fit for your novel: alicesudlow.com/wishlistReach out and let’s chat about whether your novel is a good fit for me: alicesudlow.com/contactSend me a Text Message!Want my support in your revision?In Story Clarity, we’ll work one-on-one to sharpen your story’s structure and craft a revision plan that works. If you’re ready for thoughtful, personalized feedback from an editor who gets what you’re trying to do, I’d love to hear what you’re working on.Get started by telling me about your story here. Support the showRate, Review, & Follow on Apple Podcasts "I love Alice and Your Next Draft." If that sounds like you, please consider rating and reviewing my show! This helps me support more writers through the mess—and joy—of the editing process. Click here, scroll to the bottom, tap the stars to rate, and select “Write a Review.” Then be sure to let me know what you loved most about the episode! Loving the show? Show your support with a monthly contribution »

Oct 17, 2023 • 28min
Use This One Editing Tip for Everything You Write
In this episode, the host celebrates the 50th episode milestone. They discuss a crucial editing tip that can be used in any form of writing, emphasizing the power of identifying your point and expressing it directly. The importance of clarity in writing is highlighted, along with strategies for helping writers find their intended message. The chapter also addresses the significance of courage and summarizing the point of your writing in one sentence.

Oct 11, 2023 • 24min
[BONUS EP] How to Choose the Right Writing Resources for YOU Right Now, Part 2
In this podcast, the host discusses the importance of understanding your values and needs as a writer. They explore the stages of learning and executing writing skills and provide a decision-making framework for choosing the right writing resources. They also share exclusive bonuses and express their dedication to supporting writers.