Essential Guide to Writing a Novel

James Thayer
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Sep 5, 2025 • 26min

Episode 181 - A critical difference between scene and summary.

Why should almost all of our story be scenes rather than summaries?  Here's how we can avoid summaries and instead write moment-by-moment real-time scenes in our fiction.  Also: here are perhaps the most beautiful sentences ever written in fiction.Support the show
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Aug 29, 2025 • 27min

Episode 180 - The critical distance between the reader and the action.

The reader is like a camera as the scene unfolds.  Where should that camera be?  How far away from the characters and the action?  Here are thoughts on authorial distance, about the benefits of placing the camera--the reader--near or far.  Plus, how Charlotte Bronte worked. Support the show
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Aug 22, 2025 • 27min

Episode 179 - The critical writing techniques all in one episode.

Here are the most important fiction writing techniques boiled down to twenty-five minutes.  I've talked about all these elements in prior episodes but sometimes it's useful to hear things again.  This episode is a refresher.Support the show
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Aug 15, 2025 • 28min

Episode 178 - How to make readers laugh.

We may be writing a comic novel or we may want to add humor to our thriller or romance or horror or literary novel.  Humor adds a strong element to most any story.  Joe Pesci as Tommy DeVito in Goodfellas: “Funny how?  I mean, funny like I'm a clown?  I amuse you?  I make you laugh?"  Well, yeah.  Let's see how we can make readers laugh.Support the show
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Aug 8, 2025 • 28min

Episode 177 - The description double duty technique.

Good descriptions of characters should do double duty: they can let the reader know what the character looks like and the description can also suggest something about the character's personality.  Here are examples and thoughts on double duty descriptions.  Also, how Alice Walker works. Support the show
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Aug 1, 2025 • 25min

Episode 176 - Inventing a fabulous title.

The title is the book browser's first impression of our novel.  The title should tempt the browser to pick up and open the book.  Here are thoughts on how we can give our story a strong, enticing title.  Also, how do famous authors edit their own manuscripts?  Maybe we can learn from them the best way to self-edit our stories.Support the show
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Jul 25, 2025 • 26min

Episode 175 - Writing funny dialogue.

We can write dialogue that makes readers laugh.  Here are thoughts on creating funny conversations between our characters.  Plus, we don't need to have our character look into a mirror to describe herself, which has been done time and again.  Here are ways to avoid the mirror.Support the show
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Jul 18, 2025 • 26min

Episode 174 - How to ruin our story's first sentences.

A story's first sentence should make the reader ask, "What's next?"  They should propel the reader into the story.  Here's how to do it right and how to do it wrongly.  Also, three master writers show us how to describe a setting.Support the show
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Jul 11, 2025 • 24min

Episode 173 - The magic of dialogue.

Dialogue is fun to write and fun to read.  Our story should have lots of it.  Here's a powerful thing dialogue can do: it can reveal (that is, to show rather than tell) what a character is thinking.  The character's conversation can be lively and fun, and hearing the character speak is so much stronger than reading the character's mind.  Here are thoughts on writing revealing dialogue. Support the show
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Jul 4, 2025 • 26min

Episode 172 - Our first fifteen pages.

The  first pages of our novel should contain certain elements and avoid certain elements.  Here's a list of things to include and exclude in those first pages.  Plus, ways to write forceful, clear, and lovely sentences.Support the show

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