The hosts discuss progress and improvements in the second draft of a story, including adding complications and fleshing out characters. They also talk about balancing information and engagement in storytelling. Tips are shared on encouraging and working with amateur writers, emphasizing starting from a position of not knowing much about writing and studying masterworks to improve skills.
Switching between the editor brain and the writer brain is crucial in improving writing skills.
Engaging the reader through action and showing rather than telling is key to a compelling story.
Deep dives
Feedback on the second draft
In this podcast episode, the host, Tim Grall, submits the first seven scenes of his second draft to Sean Coyne, the creator of Storygrid. Surprisingly, Sean is impressed with the scenes and comments on the different sides of the brain used in writing. The discussion delves into the importance of switching between the editor brain and the writer brain. The overall tone is supportive, encouraging Tim to enjoy the second draft process more and focus on building a clearer and more specific world for the reader.
Giving detail through action
The conversation highlights the significance of writing scenes that engage the reader through action rather than relying on expository information. They discuss the effectiveness of starting the story with a character in motion and allowing the reader to intuitively piece together details about the character and their world. The emphasis is on showing rather than telling, allowing the reader's fast thinking system to intuitively grasp the story.
The purpose of the second draft
The goal of the second draft is to address the notes and feedback from the first draft's editorial process. It involves incorporating pre-programmed structural elements and transitions to create a more cohesive and fluid reading experience. The discussion emphasizes the importance of the second draft as a significant step forward from the first draft, highlighting the evolution and learning process of a writer.
The role of compassion and enthusiasm in editing
The podcast explores the role of an editor in providing constructive feedback and guidance to an author. It emphasizes the use of shared love for great writing and masterpieces to inspire and teach, rather than tearing apart someone's work. The importance of understanding the learning process and the evolving nature of writing is highlighted, with an emphasis on celebrating the progress and growth of a writer.