#13: 5 Things That Kill Narrative Drive (and How to Fix it)
Jun 9, 2020
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An exploration of 5 narrative drive killers in storytelling, such as excessive backstory, lack of cause and effect, false mystery, cheap surprises, and coincidences. Tips on how to fix mistakes, including asking 10 key questions to enhance narrative flow. Practical worksheets provided for writers to improve their storytelling skills.
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Quick takeaways
Sprinkling relevant backstory enhances intrigue and prevents overwhelm.
Establishing cause and effect between scenes maintains narrative momentum and protagonist impact.
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Importance of Sprinkling Backstory and Exposition
Sprinkling backstory and exposition where it's relevant to the scene helps to maintain intrigue and prevent overwhelming readers. It is crucial to integrate backstory that directly impacts the protagonist's present circumstances rather than revealing too much all at once.
Cause and Effect for Narrative Drive
Creating a sense of cause and effect between scenes is essential for maintaining narrative momentum. Each scene should lead organically to the next, ensuring that events impact the protagonist both externally and internally. Avoid introducing irrelevant scenes that disrupt the natural progression of the story.
Avoiding False Mystery and Cheap Surprises
False mystery and cheap surprises hinder narrative flow by creating artificial intrigue or shocking elements without purpose. Writers should adhere to established storytelling rules and avoid withholding crucial information from readers for the sake of false suspense. Incorporating meaningful twists and surprises that align with the story's direction enhances reader engagement and satisfaction.
In today's episode, I'm continuing last week's discussion on narrative drive or that "thing" that hooks a reader's interest and pulls them through the story. Here's a preview of what's included:
[01:10] What is narrative drive? Why should writers care? (Check out last week's episode for some tips on creating narrative drive in your story). [01:20] A story with "broken" narrative drive feels like it's going nowhere. [02:00 ] Mistake #1: Putting in too much exposition or backstory or worldbuilding details in a scene at once. [03:00] Mistake #2: There's no sense of cause and effect. In other words, each scene doesn't lead into the next (and what to do instead). [4:00] Mistake #3: Using false mystery to tease readers (and how to avoid doing this). [04:45] Mistake #4: Relying on cheap surprise to thrill or scare readers (and what to do instead). [05:40] Mistake #5: Solving plot problems with coincidences. [06:45] What should you do if you make some of these mistakes in your WIP? [07:30] 10 Questions that can help you fix broken narrative drive in your story (plus where you can go to download a worksheet with these questions!). [11:05] Key points and a quick recap of the episode.
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