#154. Coaching Call: Critiquing Jac Sahlin's Query And First Five Pages
Aug 13, 2024
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In this engaging conversation, Jac Sahlin, co-host of the Book Talk for BookTok podcast and an aspiring romance novelist, seeks guidance on her query letter and manuscript. She learns about the critical importance of genre identity, especially the nuanced differences between women’s fiction and romance. Jac experiences pivotal moments in defining her story’s genre and receives valuable feedback on her crafting process. The discussion also highlights the emotional journey of querying and the impact of effective storytelling.
Defining a clear genre is essential for effective querying, as genre identity confusion can hinder agents' interest in manuscripts.
Establishing a character's transformative arc early in the narrative creates a compelling connection for readers and enhances story depth.
Receiving constructive feedback is crucial for writers' growth, transforming critiques into opportunities for refining their manuscripts collaboratively.
Deep dives
The Importance of Choosing a Genre
Deciding the genre of a writing project is crucial for effective querying and agent interest. The discussion highlights how one genre identity crisis can hinder the success of a manuscript, particularly when it straddles boundaries between women's fiction and romance. It is emphasized that a well-defined genre helps both writers and agents understand the target audience and market category for the book. Specifically, one writer's struggle with her book's identity led to advice about simplifying the concept to ensure clarity for potential agents.
The Role of Strong Character Arcs
Character arcs are pivotal in connecting readers to the protagonist and driving the narrative forward. The importance of establishing a character's journey right from the beginning is discussed, relating to how her experiences with romance and career can intertwine throughout the story. By focusing on Olivia's self-discovery and dealing with insecurities, the narrative can portray a compelling transformation that resonates with readers. Additionally, it is suggested that character development should pivot around key plot elements, such as her internship aspirations, to enhance the overall story structure.
Navigating Feedback and Revisions
Receiving feedback is a vital part of the writing process, but can often cause inner turmoil for writers. The conversation acknowledges the challenges writers face when confronted with critiques that may reveal gaps in their drafts. Writers are encouraged to view feedback as an opportunity for growth and refinement rather than a demoralizing setback. It is emphasized that working collaboratively with mentors or peers can enrich a writer's understanding and ultimately strengthen their manuscript.
Navigating Query Letters Effectively
Crafting an effective query letter is a critical step in seeking representation for a manuscript. The essentials of a successful query are explored, including the need to hook the agent’s interest, clarify genre and premise, and introduce character stakes. A query should present a complete and intriguing summary that entices agents to want to read more, ideally within a concise paragraph. By honing in on the protagonist's journey and conflicts, writers can create a powerful narrative that feels complete even in summary form.
Balancing Plot and Character Relationships
The balance between plot progression and character relationships plays a pivotal role in creating a compelling story. Strategic placement of relationship dynamics can heighten tension and draw readers deeper into the conflict, especially when varying interactions impact the protagonist’s personal growth. The discussion underscores how intertwining character arcs with professional aspirations can create a cohesive narrative that maintains reader engagement. Moreover, successfully blending personal struggles with career-based challenges can lead to more relatable and emotionally resonant storytelling.
Merging Manuscripts for Cohesion
Writers may face the challenge of effectively merging multiple manuscripts or drafts into one cohesive story. The potential to blend narrative elements from separate works is presented as a solution to enhance the flow and thematic unity of a singular manuscript. Writers are encouraged to reevaluate their drafts to identify key moments that serve the overall character arc and enrich the narrative. This restructuring empowers writers to tackle the inherent complexities of storytelling while preserving the essence of their original ideas.
“I think your story has a genre identity crisis. That’s probably why you’re not getting responses from agents.” ← That’s what I told my new friend, Jac Sahlin, about the duology she’s currently querying.
Tune into this episode to hear Jac and I talk through her query letter and first five pages—and to hear my thoughts on why she hasn’t received any requests from agents. Although Jac isn’t technically a client of mine, our conversation will give you a peek behind the scenes into what it’s like working with a book coach!
In the episode, you’ll hear us talk about things like:
[04:59] Jac’s thoughts about what it was like to get feedback from a book coach—and how it was different than getting feedback when she was taking creative writing courses in college
[08:32] My process for analyzing Jac’s query and first five pages, including where I start and what literary agents are looking for in a query package
[15:41] The difference between writing women’s fiction and romance—and why this matters both when writing a draft and querying agents
[31:25] Jac’s big a-ha moments about which genre she wants her story to fit into (and spoiler alert: she followed her gut and chose romance!
[01:03] Episode recap and final thoughts
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