Learn how to effectively edit your messy first draft from NaNoWriMo with tips on taking breaks, reading your draft with an editor's perspective, creating a revision plan, and getting feedback from beta readers or editors. Explore the essential steps and strategies for refining your manuscript and crafting engaging stories through character development, plot structure, and thematic resonance.
Take a break after finishing your draft to recharge creativity and reset your mind before starting revisions.
When revising, focus on big-picture elements like genre coherence, character development, and structural elements to guide your editing process effectively.
Deep dives
Take a Break and Refill Creativity
After completing your draft, it is crucial to take a break for about three to four weeks to recharge your creativity. Engage in activities you enjoy, like reading books in your genre or spending time with family, to rejuvenate your creative spirit. This break allows your mind and imagination to reset, as suggested by Stephen King, before diving back into revisions.
Read Your Draft as a Reader First
Upon returning to your draft after the break, read through the entire story without making edits, focusing on getting an overall sense of the narrative. Keep a notebook handy to jot down initial thoughts and emotions without altering the draft itself. This initial read-through helps you understand the story's elements and prepares you for the editing process.
Thoroughly Analyze Your Draft as an Editor
For a detailed assessment, conduct a comprehensive re-read of your draft from an editor's perspective, focusing on significant story elements. Take note of essential aspects such as genre coherence, key scenes pertinent to your story's genre, and character development, including protagonist and antagonist dynamics. Make notes on structural elements like the story's pacing, point of view consistency, and thematic elements for future revisions.
In today's episode, I'm going to walk you through what to do with your messy first draft now that NaNoWriMo is over. Here's a preview of what's included:
[01:20] Everything we cover in today's episode can be used whether you participated in NaNoWriMo or not. All that matters is that you have a finished draft. [02:30] Step #1: Take a break from your draft so that you can get some distance and give your imagination time to regenerate. [03:30] Step #2: Read your draft to familiarize yourself with what you wrote and to see all of the story pieces that you have to work with. Don't make any changes yet! [04:10] Step #3: Read your draft, again, with your editor's hat on. Focus on the big-picture elements of the story (genre, characters, structure, theme, point of view, etc.) and take notes on things you want to fix, add, delete, or change. Don’t make any changes yet, just take notes. [09:10] Step #4: Make a plan for exactly HOW you’re going to tackle your revisions. When would you like to be done? How much time will you set aside each day/week/month to work on your revisions? [10:20] Step #5: Get an outsider's perspective once you've done as much as you can on your own. Enlist the help of beta readers, a developmental editor, or even a book coach. [11:30] When should you work with a professional editor or book coach? If you're just starting, or if your draft is a big mess, a book coach can help you start over from the ground up. If you have a finished draft, a developmental editor can help you figure out your next steps. [12:55] Key points and episode recap.
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