#137: 5 Tips For Writing Better Fiction (Even If You're Just Starting Out)
Apr 9, 2024
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Tips for better fiction writing: Embrace scene structure, avoid excessive backstory, focus on protagonist's journey, navigate the story's midpoint, shift perspectives when stuck. Insights from editors and coaches on crafting compelling fiction at all levels.
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Quick takeaways
Focus on scene structure to create a seamless narrative flow.
Prioritize advancing the present moment of the story over delving into backstories.
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Understanding Scene Structure and Progression
When writing a novel, it's essential to understand scene structure and progression. Each scene should start with a character's goal, face conflict, make a choice, and experience consequences that lead to the next scene. By maintaining a tight chain of goal, conflict, choice, and consequences, authors ensure that character development and plot advancement are interconnected, providing a cohesive narrative that propels the story forward.
Focus on Present Action in Storytelling
A crucial aspect in storytelling is to prioritize the forward action of the narrative. Instead of delving deep into backstories, writers should concentrate on advancing the present moment of their story. By engaging readers with unanswered questions and moving the plot forward in real time, authors can create a dynamic and compelling narrative that propels the story towards its resolution.
Mapping Out the Protagonist's Journey
For character-driven novels, understanding and mapping out the protagonist's inner journey are paramount. Writers should delve deep into their main character's desires, obstacles, and growth throughout the story. By outlining the protagonist's internal and external struggles and ensuring their growth and evolution, authors can craft a compelling character arc that resonates with readers.
Significance of Midpoint Scenes in Storytelling
The midpoint scene in a story is a critical juncture that merges the main plotline with the character's internal growth. This moment raises the stakes for both the external plot and the protagonist's inner journey. By effectively planning and executing the midpoint, writers can enhance the cohesion between plot events and character development, leading to a more engaging and impactful narrative.
“Focus your pre-writing and drafting and revising efforts on the present moment of your story.” - Daniel David Wallace
I asked five of my peers to share one of their favorite writing tips, and boy, did they deliver! Tune in to hear 5 editors and coaches talk about their favorite tip and why it’s so helpful. Here’s a preview of what’s included:
[01:40] Tip #1: Fully embrace scene structure in your storytelling process because the narrative will flow seamlessly from beginning to end.
[06:12] Tip #2: Keep your focus on the forward momentum of your story by avoiding excessive backstory or exposition that might slow down the pacing.
[11:05] Tip #3: Dedicate equal attention to crafting your protagonist's internal journey as you do to advancing the external plot of your story.
[14:48] Tip #4: Make the most of your story's midpoint to steer clear of the often chaotic middle of the second act.
[21:52] Tip #5: If you hit a creative roadblock, assess which perspective you're currently in and try shifting to another viewpoint.
[27:26] It's so easy to overlook the three distinct perspectives—be it that of the author, character, or reader—which only adds unnecessary complexity. I find immense joy in discovering what resonates with others and moves the needle for them, particularly within the writing community. After all, different techniques suit different individuals, and exploring various perspectives from writers, coaches, and editors is invaluable.