Learn how to evaluate the conflict in your draft with a structured five-step process. Explore the importance of progressive complications and identifying what obstacles your characters face. Dive into analyzing a scene from Harry Potter to understand the impact of conflict on the overall story.
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Understanding the character's expectations sets the stage for conflicts to unfold and engage readers in the character's journey.
Ranking complications in order of severity ensures effective escalation, maintaining tension and enhancing reader investment in the character's struggle.
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Identifying Character's Goal and Expectations
In evaluating the conflict in a scene, the first step is to identify the point of view character's goal and their plan to achieve it. Understanding what the character expects to happen while pursuing their goal is crucial as it sets the stage for the conflicts to unfold. Knowing the character's expectations helps in portraying their struggle as they navigate through unexpected challenges, driving the reader's engagement in the character's journey.
Listing Complications and Obstacles
After defining the character's goal, the next step involves listing all the complications that hinder the character's progress. These complications can be positive or negative factors that disrupt the character's path towards achieving their goal. By visualizing these obstacles as deviations from a straight line representing the character's goal, the impact of each complication on steering the character away from their initial plan becomes evident.
Ranking and Escalation of Complications
Once the complications are identified, they need to be ranked to determine their level of challenge and impact on the character's journey. Ranking the complications in order of increasing severity or in terms of proximity to goal achievement helps in assessing whether the conflicts escalate effectively. Ensuring a gradual increase in the complexity of obstacles maintains the tension and progression within the scene, enhancing the reader's investment in the character's struggle.
In today’s episode, I’m going to walk you through my five-step process for evaluating the conflict in your novel. Here's a preview of what's included:
[01:20] Progressive complications are moments of conflict that gets harder and harder to deal with overtime. To learn more about writing good conflict, check out last week's episode (episode #21). [02:30] Step 1: Identify what your POV character wants and how they plan to get it. You’ll also want to have a good understanding of what your character expects to happen. So, do they expect to succeed? Do they expect things to be difficult? [03:30] Step 2: List everything that gets in your character’s way as they pursue their goal. And remember, these complications can be positive or negative. It’s just whatever gets in your character’s way as they go after their goal. [04:45] Step 3: Rank your list of complications to see if they escalate properly or not. [06:10] Step 4: Identify the turning point -- or the moment things change. Ask yourself how you feel about the change that occurs and determine whether it’s impactful or not. [07:50] Step 5: Consider how the scene (or whatever you’re analyzing) affects the global story. So, if you’re analyzing a scene, how does this scene contribute to the global story? How does it move the story forward? [08:45] An example of this type of analysis using a scene from the movie Harry Potter and the Goblet of Fire. Plus, how this seemingly insignificant scene is a set up for a lot of important stuff that happens later in the story. [14:15] Key points and episode recap.
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