A story of harsh discipline from Uncle Osama, a market altercation over bread, family dynamics, and relief from Hafiz's behavior. Moments of freedom shattered by tragedy and reflections on mourning and prayers for protection from genetic traits.
Uncle Osama's violent discipline led to a cycle of violence and submission in the family.
Hafiz sought traditional rituals to cope with psychological distress caused by his father's behavior.
The protagonist found temporary freedom and relief from violence during Uncle Osama's absence, leading to a grim turning point upon his return.
Deep dives
Uncle Osama's Violent Discipline
Uncle Osama, known as the official disciplinarian of Zongos, had a reputation for his violent punishments. He was prone to emotional unrest and enforced discipline through physical abuse, often using a bullwhip on misbehaving children. His dominating wife, Marzibi, played a significant role in his behavior, leading to a cycle of violence and submission within their family.
Hafiz's Troublesome Experience
Hafiz, Uncle Osama's son, suffered psychological distress after witnessing the harsh discipline meted out by his father. His behavior turned erratic, displaying signs of paranoia and anxiety. He underwent traditional rituals like drinking potions and using talismans to drive away perceived bad genes, seeking a solution to his troubled state.
Escape from Harsh Discipline
The protagonist, after enduring severe beatings and emotional turmoil from Uncle Osama, finds brief respite when Uncle is away on a trip. The period of his absence allows the young boy to enjoy a sense of freedom and play without the shadow of violence looming over him. Unfortunately, the return of Uncle Osama signals a grim turning point in their lives.
Tragic Turn of Events
The sudden and unexpected death of Uncle Osama in a car accident shatters the community, drawing crowds to mourn his passing. The protagonist, initially devoid of emotion, finds a sense of guilt and sorrow as he reflects on the complexities of life and death. Despite their tumultuous relationship, he offers prayers and seeks solace for the departed soul.
Conclusion: Reflection and Prayer
The protagonist, overcome with emotion and conflicting thoughts, reflects on the implications of Uncle Osama's death and its impact on their lives. As tears flow and prayers are offered, the focus shifts to seeking mercy and protection for Hafiz, highlighting a sense of hope amidst the tragedy. Through grief and reflection, the protagonist navigates the complexities of loss and family dynamics in the wake of Uncle Osama's demise.
Mohammed Naseehu Ali reads his story “Allah Have Mercy” from the April 1, 2024, issue of the magazine. Ali is the author of “The Prophet of Zongo Street,” a story collection, which came out in 2005. He teaches undergraduate fiction in N.Y.U.’s Creative Writing department.
