This podcast provides 10 tips for writing better dialogue, emphasizing the importance of purpose, conflict, and tension in dialogues. It discusses curating dialogue, creating unique character vocabularies, and using subtext. The podcast also explores the role of dialogue in controlling pacing and offers strategies for crafting engaging dialogue.
Dialogue should serve a purpose in the story and reveal character relationships, context, conflict, theme, or plot.
Characters should use dialogue to further their own agendas and goals, showcasing their motivations and moving closer to or further from accomplishing them.
Deep dives
Tip 1: Purposeful Dialogue
Ensure that your dialogue serves a purpose in the story, such as revealing character, establishing context, highlighting the theme, setting the tone, or advancing the plot. In the book 'Fable' by Adrian Young, the dialogue serves the purpose of establishing the context of the scene and revealing something about the character's relationships and central conflict.
Tip 2: Dialogue as Action
Think of dialogue as action rather than exposition. Characters should speak to further their own agendas and goals. For example, in 'The Fourth Wing' by Rebecca Yarrow, the character Mira actively tries to convince her mother to change her mind, showcasing her goal and motivation.
Tip 3: Character Goals in Dialogue
Understand each character's goals and motivations within each scene and the overarching story. Effective dialogue helps characters move closer to or further from accomplishing their goals. An example from 'Legends and Lattes' by Travis Baldry showcases the clear goals of Viv and Ansem in their dialogue.
In today’s episode, I’m sharing my top 10 tips for writing stronger, more impactful dialogue in your novel. Here’s a preview of what’s included:
[02:00] Tip #1: Make sure your dialogue serves a purpose in the overarching story. [03:00] Tip #2: Think of your dialogue as action vs. exposition (or active vs. passive). [06:09] Tip #3: Get clear on each character’s goal and motivation within a scene. [07:43] Tip #4: Make sure your dialogue is ripe with conflict and tension. [10:02] Tip #5: Check that your dialogue sounds right for your genre and tone. [11:15] Tip #6: Ensure each character has a unique and rich vocabulary. [13:13] Tip #7: Curate your dialogue to show readers only what they need to see. [14:30] Tip #8: Keep your dialogue short and to the point. [16:16] Tip #9: Aim to have your dialogue do more than one thing—and include subtext. [18:19] Tip #10: Use dialogue to help you control your story’s pacing. [20:17] Final thoughts and episode recap.
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