504: What Colleges Want (Part 4): A Crash Course in the Personal Statement with Ethan Sawyer (College Essay Guy)

On this week’s episode, Tom Campbell (CEG’s Community Manager) sits down with Ethan Sawyer (College Essay Guy) for Part 4 in our What Colleges Want series to talk about the personal statement. According to the latest State of College Admission report – after grades, course rigor, and positive character traits (see previous episodes), the college essay is what colleges care about most. Tom and Ethan get into: 

• What is the purpose of the personal statement? 
• How do you find a topic, especially if you’re not writing about challenges?  
• Why do I recommend students NOT choose a common extracurricular activity as their main college essay topic? 
• How do you stand out? 
• And how do you know when you’re done?

Fun fact: You’ll find the YouTube video version of this podcast on the College Essay Guy YouTube channel.

 

Play-by-Play

• 1:38 - What is the purpose of the personal statement in the college admission process?
• 2:53 - How might students use this statement for multiple schools? 
• 3:48 - Should students talk about challenges they’ve faced in a personal statement? 
• 6:47 - Should students talk about their major or career goals?
• 8:33 - Where is the best place to discuss extracurricular activities? 
• 10:20 - Should students explain red flags in their personal statement?
• 11:26 - How can students brainstorm potential topics for their personal statement?
• 17:56 - What is the structure of a personal statement?
• 21:11 - How can students stand out?
• 28:57 - Case Study: What does the process look like from brainstorming to final draft?
• 35:39 - How does a student know when their essay is done?
• 38:27 - Is there a place for artificial intelligence in the college essay?
• 41:47 - have personal statements shifted since the Supreme Court ruling on Race-Conscious Admissions?
• 44:04 - Why does the personal statement process matter?
• 49:14 - Closing thoughts

 

Resources

• YouTube Video version of this episode (504)
• Sample personal statements
• 7 Brainstorming Exercises (YouTube video)
• The “Food” essay (YouTube video analysis)
• The Great College Essay Test
• Why You Don’t Have to Write about Trauma in Your College Essay to Stand Out—and What You Can Do Instead
• Matchlighters Informaiton
• CEG Podcast Episode 404: Race-Conscious Admission Was Struck Down—What Does This Mean and What Can Students and College Counselors Do? w/ Jay Rosner
• Is It “Okay” to Talk About Race in Your College Application and Essays—And If So, How Should You Do It?