How I Got Published – Writing My First Novel with The Novelry

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Nov 4, 2025

Brisa Carleton is a debut novelist whose upcoming book, Last Call at the Savoy, was secured through her journey with The Novelry. She shares her spark for writing, inspired by historical women in cocktails. Brisa dives into the coaching that refined her manuscript and discusses the emotional process of finishing her first draft. She recounts her thrilling agent outreach and the rapid creation of her second book. Packed with insights on editorial feedback and the publishing timeline, Brisa emphasizes the importance of a tight hook and market awareness to aspiring authors.

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Think About Genre And Reader Early

Do treat genre and readership as early, practical constraints when planning a commercial novel.
Do read widely to learn genre tropes and shape a book that fits market expectations.

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Keep Your First Draft Private

Avoid telling everyone about your first draft and treat it as a private experiment.
Share the draft only after revision, then seek a few trusted readers for feedback.

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Use Editorial Feedback To Reshape

Do use professional editorial feedback to find structural issues you can't see yourself.
Be willing to 'kill your darlings' so the book can improve in big-picture ways.

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Do you dream of publishing a book?

Join editor Josie Humber and author Brisa Carleton for this very special bonus episode of The Novelry on Writing. Find out how Brisa turned an idea into her debut novel, Last Call at the Savoy (publishing November 4, 2025), through The Novelry’s world-class writing courses.

Discover how expert guidance with author coaches, editorial mentorship, and a supportive writing community can take your story from first draft to publication.

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Chapters

00:00:00 — Intro to The Novelry and the episode.
00:02:30 — The spark: Brisa’s first idea before Last Call at the Savoy.
00:05:00 — Early momentum: first steps and the initial hurdles.
00:07:30 — Building a first draft: routine, accountability, structure.
00:10:00 — Editorial feedback at The Novelry: how guidance sharpened the work.
00:17:30 — Submission strategy: polishing for agents and editors.
00:20:00 — Finding an agent: outreach, conversations, next moves.
00:22:30 — After the ‘yes’: refinement and forward plan.
00:25:00 — Craft breakthroughs that made the draft sing.
00:30:00 — The book deal moment and what followed.
00:32:30 — Nailing your hook and pitch.
00:35:00 — Loving the process (and looking ahead to launch).
00:37:30 — Gratitude, and advice for writers at every stage.
00:40:00 — Invitation to begin: how The Novelry can help you start today!

Guest Bios

Brisa Carleton was introduced by The Novelry to literary agent Rebecca Scherer at the Jane Rotrosen Agency, and went on to sign a book deal with Grand Central Publishing, an imprint of Hachette, for her debut novel, Last Call at the Savoy. **Pitched for readers of Josie Silver and Fiona Davis and set at the legendary London hotel, the novel follows a young writer who helps uncover the history of the famed American Bar’s first (and forgotten) female bartender, Ada Coleman.

Josie Humber is Deputy Editorial Director at The Novelry, and previously a Senior Commissioning Editor at Hodder & Stoughton (Hachette), home to authors including Jodi Picoult, Stephen King, David Nicholls, and Erin Kelly. Josie has worked with bestselling authors such as Kate Mosse, Kate Morton, and Joanna Trollope.

Resources

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What is a Story? Uncovering the Art of Great Storytelling

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The Novelry on Writing Podcast: How to Write a Page-Turning Story

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Learn how novels work from publishing’s top experts at The Novelry, the world’s No.1 school for writers. Hosted by our bestselling writing coaches and publishing editors, this podcast is a practical, helpful guide to writing novels for every genre. Enjoy inside tips and tricks to make your writing a joyful experience while building your expertise in writing craft.

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