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084 || Fantasy Fiction Friday: Chapter 37 of The Dragon Collector, a YA Fantasy Novel

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Oct 14, 2023
In this gripping chapter, Javan confronts a harrowing reality as he trudges through a massive crowd, heading towards his mother’s public execution. The atmosphere is thick with tension and desperation, amplifying his inner turmoil. As he approaches the scene, the weight of his emotions and the impending tragedy set the stage for pivotal changes in his journey. It’s a dark and intense moment that deepens the narrative, pulling listeners into a landscape of despair and bravery.
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ANECDOTE

Javen's Heavy March to Execution

  • Javen moves through a vast, tense crowd gathering to witness his mother’s execution.
  • The crowd's silence and hatred deepen Javen's resolve and focus on hope and change.
INSIGHT

Execution Day Dampens Spirits

  • The crowd resembles obedient sheep, silently accepting the grim spectacle and purpose of the execution day.
  • The event's goal is to kill the spirits of people, showing the psychological control the rulers wield.
ADVICE

Use Crowd Mood To Enhance Story

  • Observe your characters' environments and emotional states to deepen storytelling impact.
  • Use crowd reactions and silence to reflect social mood and heighten narrative tension.
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