207. What Agents & Readers Want: How to Write a Story That Works

Have you ever sat down to write a novel and thought, “Where do I even begin?” Or maybe you’ve started writing, but something feels... off. The story isn’t coming together the way you imagined, and you’re not sure why.

You’re not alone. Most writers struggle with this because they’re missing the foundational elements that make a story work. It’s not about writing beautiful sentences or having a brilliant idea—it’s about knowing how to build a story that readers can’t put down.

In this episode, I’m breaking down the five key elements every successful novel needs to hook agents and readers. Whether you’re just starting your first draft or revising for querying, this episode will help you craft a story that works and keeps readers turning the pages.

Tune in to learn:

• [02:40] Why beautiful prose isn’t enough to get published—and the real reason agents reject manuscripts
• [03:45] The 5 essential elements every successful novel needs to hook agents and readers
• [04:15] How to create characters readers care about—even if they’re not “likable”
• [05:20] Why stakes and conflict are the backbone of every compelling story (and how to get them right)
• [08:25] The secret to crafting an emotional journey that keeps readers turning pages 

If you’ve been focusing on perfecting your prose but struggling to create a story that works—or if you’ve faced rejection despite positive feedback on your writing style—this episode will transform how you approach novel writing and the publishing process.

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