The 'fun and games' section of a story should showcase the protagonist's growth and transformation by introducing conflict and challenging situations.
To navigate multi-scene beats effectively, focus on the character's goals and micro-goals within each scene, integrating internal dilemmas and reflective moments with external actions.
Deep dives
Importance of Conflict and Character Development in Storytelling
One common mistake writers make is assuming that the 'fun and games' section of a story should be devoid of conflict. However, the key to this section is to showcase the protagonist's growth and transformation by putting them in uncomfortable situations. By introducing conflict and making the character navigate through challenging circumstances, the story becomes more engaging and dynamic.
Balancing External and Internal Beats in Multi-Scene Sections
Multi-scene beats, such as the 'debate,' can be challenging to navigate as writers often struggle with maintaining conflict and raising stakes throughout. To overcome this, it is important to focus on the character's goals and micro-goals within each scene. By integrating internal dilemmas and reflective moments with external actions, writers can create a seamless blend of external conflict and internal growth that propels the story forward.
Understanding the Purpose of the Setup
Many writers mistakenly believe that the setup of a story should be mundane and lacking conflict, leading them to delay crucial story beats to avoid 'boring' the reader. However, the setup is an opportunity to captivate readers and entice them to continue reading. By adding intrigue, asking questions, and establishing goals for the protagonist early on, writers can create a compelling setup that engages the reader from the very beginning.
The Value of Analyzing and Breaking Down Stories
Analyzing and breaking down stories, whether in books, movies, or television shows, is an invaluable tool for learning storytelling techniques. By asking questions about why certain story elements work and how they impact the reader or viewer, writers can gain a deeper understanding of effective storytelling. This practice of studying existing stories can greatly enhance one's own writing skills and enable them to apply those techniques in their own work.
“Every time you write something hard, it changes you as a writer, and it makes you a better writer.”- Jessica Brody
Today I'm sharing a conversation with Jessica Brody where we talk about some of the most common mistakes writers make when outlining, writing, and editing their books using the “Save the Cat” method.
[02:30] Jessica introduces herself and shares her experience writing fiction using the Save The Cat! plotting method.
[04:00] Savannah asks Jessica about marrying the external plot of a story to the protagonist's internal arc. Savannah sees a lot of writers focus solely on the external plot events and not enough on character growth and development. Jessica shares her thoughts on how to make sure you're balancing both plot and character as you write.
[11:45] Savannah asks Jessica to talk about two important multi-scene beats—the Fun and Games beat and the Bad Guys Close In beat. Jessica shares her thoughts on breaking these longer beats down into smaller, more manageable chunks.
[18:00] Savannah asks Jessica about being too rigid with the Save The Cat! structure. Specifically, what happens if your beats don't line up with the percentages recommended? Jessica shares her thoughts.
[21:50] Jessica talks about how she had a hard time with the All Is Lost beat and the Dark Night Of The Soul beat until she figured out a very important distinction.
[30:40] Jessica talks about some things to consider in terms of your first 25-50 pages when it comes time to query agents.