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#101: First Chapter Analysis: Remarkably Bright Creatures by Shelby Van Pelt

Fiction Writing Made Easy | Top Creative Writing Podcast for Fiction Writers & Writing Tips

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The Inciting Incident With Marcel Behind the Vending Machine

The first line is tova Sullivan prepares for battle and then a yellow rubber glove sticks up from her back pocket like a canary's plume. So it's kind of like we meet her and she's already pursuing this goal. I think what it does is that it establishes tova is someone who doesn't just take okay or decently cleaned as acceptable. We also see that Marcel is in his tank and then later he's out of his tank.

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