The Language of Works Doesn't Work

When i was starting, i didn't even have the language of works doesn't work. So for people who were like me and are just writing on instinct, how do you figure out what kind of editing you need? Ok, well, i think it it goes to your fundamental nature. Are you an introvert or an extravert? Ok, that's one element f the equation. But the super macro element of the equation is you. You must, must ask yourself an extremely difficult question. And there are a couple of answers to that. The two answers that are easy to come up with are money or internal need. My crisis is, i want to right for money or for myself