Is This Scene Sucks, Make It Not Suck?

i think that more often than not, some of this just comes with ance. I have certain traps that i fall into, as do i and when i see that i'm falling into those traps, lots of times i don't catch these on the first pass. And sometimes all you need is a baiter reader, yo, baiter readers, alfer readers, whatever y goind to call, pra reader sode say, per yes.