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Naomi's Broken Points in Couple's Therapy
Naomi has such a strong voice and it immediately leaves off the page. I came away from these opening pages thinking I actually know more about Tammy the therapist than who Ryan is. We need to see what was Ryan doing in therapy was he fidgeting were they making eye contact did he dress up for this therapy session did he dress down? That would go a long way with seeing Ryan through Naomi's eyes and also giving us insight into their marriage.
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