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Death Of 1000 Cuts

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The Raindrop: A Novel

"I can't follow what you're saying in this scene. What's happening I'm just not sure I care" "You build it up so much David You go into the big lyrical flights of fancy and use multiple similes and metaphors Sometimes frankenstein together into these lopsided metaphysical conceits," he says. 'It's a little tickling Cleashib but I don't mind, you know, you actually tell it very simply and unadorned But I'm frustrated because you've shut me out of the story'

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