The Mentor in Whiplash

When you're crafting on the surface, you start to spin out this really incredible tapestry of motion. And then now, when you're looking at beyond the surface, what you're going to discover is that a lot of itis already baked in there. You can't really be able to take that level of analysis to your story until you've done on the surface and above the surface. The higher up the pyramid, the more slippery it is. Jane austin did this. She pulled off beyondth urface. To get, i mean, it's slippery. But shes knowing about it is superimportant. I don't know, maybe i feel like i lost the thread