I'm Staring at the Reflection of My Eyes in the Window of the Back Seat of My Father's Car

The first half of the book, i tried to write the pieces as if they were songs. I can see it, causeike, the sentences are so short, yet each sentence, you could very easily put it into a song. You know, whe you got three minutes, you got to make it rhyme and youl. Have to stop people in their tracks and bring them into another world. And now, yes, that choice about it?