Do You Know When You Didn't Tell Story Well?

Listen to the show notes from last week's episode of longmyr. Get the sides, download those sides, work on them. Then go and listen to what they say about the characters,. In terms of character ark, in terms of casting, all those sorts of things. Ok? So number one is my odition that i did poorly in telling story was an adition i had for longmyr it was a self tape, and it was a red herring. A red herring usually is one scene, and they don't come back a guess. The person who as the red herring serves very much to represent the possibility that this person defnly killed them.