How to Be Concise

Use as few words as possible. Concision is actually gives me secondary information about you as a team. It lets me, one know that you have thought deeply about your idea. The other thing about being concise is it shows to me that you are efficient. And if you are efficient with your words, then youare probably efficient with your thoughts. Tat means you're probably also efficient with your actions. So there's ome minimum stuff that we want to have, even thouh we're trying to be as concise as possible. This is a real start up school company description. Iit's an on line commerce store. But again, it's not a description that helps me get excited