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You've Got to Make Ernst a Really, Really Good Spy, Right?
You need to set it up and drip in where, like marcus is always freeking out that they're spies everywhere. What you probably would have done is just dumped a shipload of exposition in there about how everyone's competing for these things in bablas blas. And the way you've shown that is to make ernst a really, really good spy. I think the readers are going to find ernst to be extremely attractive as a character because he is not the physical force, tough guy that alex is. So when ernst betrays jessie, what i think will happen for the reader is, oh my gosh, why didn't i