Character Dynamics and Dialogue Analysis

John and Craig welcome back producer Megana Rao, who has a question: how do you polish a script before sending it out? From obvious things like typos and title pages to tougher choices like cutting and transitions, they look at what to consider on a final pass so you can email your script with confidence.

Then it’s another round of the Three Page Challenge, where we look at three listener-submitted scripts to offer our honest feedback on what’s working and what could use another pass. We also follow-up on advice for general meetings.

In our bonus segment for premium members, what makes a great score? We look at the function of the soundtrack for feature films and how to work with composers.

Links:

• Follow along with our Three Page Challenge selections! The Thin Place – “Pilot” by Katie Seward, Sunset Paycheck by Holden Potter, and Levelling Up by Sylvia-Anne Parker
• Submit to the next Three Page Challenge
• Megana Rao on Instagram and X
• Fixed-do vs. movable do solfège
• How to Tell if Something is AI-Written by Hollis Robbins
• Mark Halpin 2025 Labor Day Extravaganza
• Pageant of the Masters
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• Outro by NIck Moore (send us yours!)
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