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How to Make a Major Shift in a Story
There's a moment in the pattern scene when Capelli says, oh, he's dealt with a lot of taxpayers. And then that's it. Right. So I added that second line specifically, one of the weeks I was given feedback about this doesn't feel like a place where a cop has been killed. Even with the chaos, it would still be a lull. But that was my way of inserting that everything has been nuts for two days.