illustrations really matter, and they do a lot of the work for you. It's actually much, much harder to write short and to write long. So we need to understand who serita's mother is to her, right? That's never really explored in the story. And so there needs to be maybe a little bit more gentleness. Ogo nanna needs, nana needs to relay that she understands that this baby is hurting. S that make sens yes, definitely make sens here's another tip.

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