Jeffrey Donoman's Movie Is a Terrible Movie

The first 20 minutes of this movie is a terrible movie. No one behaves like a human being who's this guy. None of the dialogue for any of those scenes in the locker room at the pool table and none of it makes any damn sense. I think it's just so badly written. If this movie had like a nice like nice bit of polish by somebody who could craft human dialogue, especially for Holt McElney,. Like every time he spoke in this movie, I just like I felt physically hurt because I love this guy. What is his fucking deal? It's about psychopaths killing other psychopaths.