How Do You Think About the Small Details of Word Choices in Your Work?

i miss that attention to detail when i think about how it feels to walk into a beloved restaurant. Well, i'm not selling o neapolitan piza, but i am selling the way a story makes you feel. I don't edit my work very heavily, so don't come to me for that. Now, ouyou can go listen to steve wright tell jokes that are perfect to the microsecond - cause he's practised the same hundred minutes for his whole life. But that's not what i'm doing here. And as someone who, you know, made up a fewd when i get one, i feel really good about it,. because it means that