How to Write a Good Book Description

The first sentence of the query letter was pretty good. The difference for me for E queries I still read the the queries that say dear agent but I don't respond to them unless I want the book. So if a query copy 50 agents I probably won't read it because then we find it really annoying. Dan, why didn't you write that book? I had to write this crappy one instead. Do you want some money? Yeah. Well now talk to us about that. Now does that really make a big is that a big part of your decision? It definitely makes any agent stop and look more closely at the book descriptionbut it won't make me take on the client.