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624 Break Down: The Surprising Mistake in Tim's First Draft

Story Grid Writing Podcast

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The Breathing Through My Mouth

The protagonist is always theot er, right? So i could go in and try to just, you know, adjust a couple of things and force that into the thing. But then there's the more kind of, i don't know what you would call it, but the breathing through my mouth is keeping me looking at the world through watson's eyes rather than randall's Eyes. The difference s between those two are the differences between demonstrative indexcality of present moment as best captured by a narrator,. versus quaqualitative analysis of the internal a, subjective experiences of each of the avatars.

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