Writing a Heroine in Television or Movie

This week in writing is not meant to put you on the spot, but it's about taking big swings. i was inspired by joshua r last night when he submitted the firstt of a speckscript that he's been working on. You've actually writen the whole script, but you're revising it now, and so you just submitted the first act. And i thought, josh did something really brave that i'm really terrified to do. Where he's started his revision, his his act one is now 15 pages later than it was in your original draft,. Thereabouts. You took out your entire original opening, which, like, is huge. It is really