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The Power Business Writing Guide
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How to Write Better Business Writing
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Great business writing has a clear target reaction, a deliberate purpose or aim. Jeff Bezos instilled this principle in Amazon's Writing Center culture. When in doubt, replace fluff words with data. A storytelling touch will make your writing punch well above its weight. High leverage storytelling is a supercharger for all endeavors.
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Today at a Glance:
Study the lives and practices of today’s most successful entrepreneurs, financiers, and builders and you’ll find one common trait: a deep, visceral understanding of the importance of powerful, efficient, high-leverage writing.
Why? These leaders know that powerful writing isn't an accident—clear writing is clear thinking.
The four key principles of powerful business writing: (1) Draft Fast, Edit Slow, (2) KISS, (3) Clear Target Reaction, and (4) Storytelling.
The Power Business Writing Guide
Want to accelerate your career? Write better. Period.
Study the lives and practices of today’s most successful entrepreneurs, financiers, and builders and you’ll find one common trait: a deep, visceral understanding of the importance of powerful, efficient, high-leverage writing.
Jeff Bezos famously installed memo writing as a mainstay of Amazon’s business culture. Prior to kicking off a meeting, attendees would be asked to read and digest several pages of written memos from the meeting leads. Why? Bezos deeply believed in the value of these memos, not only for the uninformed participants, but also for the meeting leads to clarify their thinking through the writing process.
Warren Buffett famously writes an annual shareholder letter, distilling insights on billions of dollars in investments into a single memo.
The list of writing advocates goes on and on…
Why? These leaders know that powerful writing isn't an accident—clear writing is clear thinking.
In this piece, I will attempt to deconstruct the four key principles of powerful business writing…
They are as follows:
Draft Fast, Edit Slow
KISS
Clear Target Reaction
Storytelling
I’ll cover each principle and provide some additional learning resources:
Principle 1: Draft Fast, Edit Slow
There's nothing more daunting than a blank page.
We have all experienced it at one time or another—sitting at our desk, staring into the abyss of a blank Word document or notebook page, with no idea where to start. The perfect line is illusive, and everyone knows you need a perfect first line…
The solution?
Play a trick on yourself. Start writing, fast. Get a draft down—and don’t worry at all about the quality (seriously, it’s ok if it sucks).
My friend Julian Shapiro said it best: “Making something bad then iterating until it’s good is faster than making something good upfront.”
Here's a framework that works for me: Write-Rest-Review.
Write-Rest-Review
Get the first draft down as quickly as possible.
Walk away for 5 minutes—go for a walk, grab a coffee, listen to some music, whatever.
Come back and review the draft with the benefit of that refresh.
Ask a bunch of questions:
What's missing?
Where are the logical flaws?
Where are the cracks?
Where is the writing loose or flimsy?
When you review with "new" eyes, good things tend to happen.
Try out Write-Rest-Review and let me know how it works for you!
Principle 2: Keep It Simple, Stupid
Most people assume that longer, more complex writing will impress and inspire.
Sorry, it doesn't.
Great business writing is simple and direct. There's no fluff or handwaving—it's tactical.
A few actionable tips to tighten and simplify:
Cut the Fluff
In school, we were taught to heap descriptors into our writing. We were told it made it more vibrant. It also helped fill out the word or page count we were forced to hit…
In the real world, those fluff words are the silent killers of powerful business writing.
Review your draft with an eye towards removing any unnecessary words & sentences.
Some common fluff:
"I think X"
"Very" (or similar adverbs)
Acronyms
Jargon
$10 words (i.e. fancy, big, long words)
Be ruthless in identifying and eliminating the fluff words & sentences from your writing.
Shorten Everything
Powerful business writing is very similar to powerful Twitter writing: short, punchy writing is better.
Use short sentence structures.
Space sentences or paragraphs out to make the writing more optically pleasing. Great business writing should be engaging to the eye.
I have found writing more on Twitter to be a force amplifier for my business writing—it’s a forced brevity training ground. Use it to your advantage as you work at your craft.
Add Data
This is a classic principle instilled by Jeff Bezos in Amazon's writing-centric culture.
When in doubt, replace fluff words with data.
Before: "The majority of viewers loved the show."
After: "95% of viewers rated the show with 5-stars."
The after is clear & much more impactful!
Principle 3: Clear Target Reaction
Great business writing has a clear target reaction—a deliberate purpose or aim.
That target reaction should be experienced by the reader immediately. As my friend Sam Parr says, "Punch the reader in the face with your first sentence."
Amazon calls it the "so what?" test:
Before you share any piece of business writing, identify the "so what?" of the piece. What reaction, value, or takeaway should the audience have? Is it coming across loud and clear? If not, go back to the drawing board and punch harder.
This target reaction should be a central focus during your writing process. I force it into mind by putting a big sticker with the target reaction at the top of the page (to be removed at the end).
Principle 4: Storytelling
Storytelling is a foundational skill—but it's one we don’t learn in the traditional education system. It's no coincidence that the greatest CEOs & founders are the greatest storytellers. High-leverage storytelling is a supercharger for all endeavors.
Humans are naturally wired as storytelling creatures—we developed around campfires. Lean into this wiring.
Adding a story to a memo on a dry topic can bring the entire piece to life. Simple, crisp stories enhance the power of the message.
A few ideas for you:
Add a mini anecdote to illustrate a point.
Use a folksy one-liner to draw people ...
Today’s newsletter is brought to you by Lemon.io!
Lemon.io fixes the developer headache—it makes hiring remote developer talent as easy as ordering a meal on DoorDash. Tell them about your project and they match you with an affordable, vetted developer in Eastern Europe within 48 hours. Guaranteed. I’ve used it for several quick projects and have loved the experience.
SPECIAL OFFER: 15% discount for the first 4 weeks of work for all Curiosity Chronicle subscribers. Take advantage by using the link below!
Today at a Glance:
Study the lives and practices of today’s most successful entrepreneurs, financiers, and builders and you’ll find one common trait: a deep, visceral understanding of the importance of powerful, efficient, high-leverage writing.
Why? These leaders know that powerful writing isn't an accident—clear writing is clear thinking.
The four key principles of powerful business writing: (1) Draft Fast, Edit Slow, (2) KISS, (3) Clear Target Reaction, and (4) Storytelling.
The Power Business Writing Guide
Want to accelerate your career? Write better. Period.
Study the lives and practices of today’s most successful entrepreneurs, financiers, and builders and you’ll find one common trait: a deep, visceral understanding of the importance of powerful, efficient, high-leverage writing.
Jeff Bezos famously installed memo writing as a mainstay of Amazon’s business culture. Prior to kicking off a meeting, attendees would be asked to read and digest several pages of written memos from the meeting leads. Why? Bezos deeply believed in the value of these memos, not only for the uninformed participants, but also for the meeting leads to clarify their thinking through the writing process.
Warren Buffett famously writes an annual shareholder letter, distilling insights on billions of dollars in investments into a single memo.
The list of writing advocates goes on and on…
Why? These leaders know that powerful writing isn't an accident—clear writing is clear thinking.
In this piece, I will attempt to deconstruct the four key principles of powerful business writing…
They are as follows:
Draft Fast, Edit Slow
KISS
Clear Target Reaction
Storytelling
I’ll cover each principle and provide some additional learning resources:
Principle 1: Draft Fast, Edit Slow
There's nothing more daunting than a blank page.
We have all experienced it at one time or another—sitting at our desk, staring into the abyss of a blank Word document or notebook page, with no idea where to start. The perfect line is illusive, and everyone knows you need a perfect first line…
The solution?
Play a trick on yourself. Start writing, fast. Get a draft down—and don’t worry at all about the quality (seriously, it’s ok if it sucks).
My friend Julian Shapiro said it best: “Making something bad then iterating until it’s good is faster than making something good upfront.”
Here's a framework that works for me: Write-Rest-Review.
Write-Rest-Review
Get the first draft down as quickly as possible.
Walk away for 5 minutes—go for a walk, grab a coffee, listen to some music, whatever.
Come back and review the draft with the benefit of that refresh.
Ask a bunch of questions:
What's missing?
Where are the logical flaws?
Where are the cracks?
Where is the writing loose or flimsy?
When you review with "new" eyes, good things tend to happen.
Try out Write-Rest-Review and let me know how it works for you!
Principle 2: Keep It Simple, Stupid
Most people assume that longer, more complex writing will impress and inspire.
Sorry, it doesn't.
Great business writing is simple and direct. There's no fluff or handwaving—it's tactical.
A few actionable tips to tighten and simplify:
Cut the Fluff
In school, we were taught to heap descriptors into our writing. We were told it made it more vibrant. It also helped fill out the word or page count we were forced to hit…
In the real world, those fluff words are the silent killers of powerful business writing.
Review your draft with an eye towards removing any unnecessary words & sentences.
Some common fluff:
"I think X"
"Very" (or similar adverbs)
Acronyms
Jargon
$10 words (i.e. fancy, big, long words)
Be ruthless in identifying and eliminating the fluff words & sentences from your writing.
Shorten Everything
Powerful business writing is very similar to powerful Twitter writing: short, punchy writing is better.
Use short sentence structures.
Space sentences or paragraphs out to make the writing more optically pleasing. Great business writing should be engaging to the eye.
I have found writing more on Twitter to be a force amplifier for my business writing—it’s a forced brevity training ground. Use it to your advantage as you work at your craft.
Add Data
This is a classic principle instilled by Jeff Bezos in Amazon's writing-centric culture.
When in doubt, replace fluff words with data.
Before: "The majority of viewers loved the show."
After: "95% of viewers rated the show with 5-stars."
The after is clear & much more impactful!
Principle 3: Clear Target Reaction
Great business writing has a clear target reaction—a deliberate purpose or aim.
That target reaction should be experienced by the reader immediately. As my friend Sam Parr says, "Punch the reader in the face with your first sentence."
Amazon calls it the "so what?" test:
Before you share any piece of business writing, identify the "so what?" of the piece. What reaction, value, or takeaway should the audience have? Is it coming across loud and clear? If not, go back to the drawing board and punch harder.
This target reaction should be a central focus during your writing process. I force it into mind by putting a big sticker with the target reaction at the top of the page (to be removed at the end).
Principle 4: Storytelling
Storytelling is a foundational skill—but it's one we don’t learn in the traditional education system. It's no coincidence that the greatest CEOs & founders are the greatest storytellers. High-leverage storytelling is a supercharger for all endeavors.
Humans are naturally wired as storytelling creatures—we developed around campfires. Lean into this wiring.
Adding a story to a memo on a dry topic can bring the entire piece to life. Simple, crisp stories enhance the power of the message.
A few ideas for you:
Add a mini anecdote to illustrate a point.
Use a folksy one-liner to draw people ...
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