Why Is the Scene Not Clicking?

If a scene is not working, i got to be real analytical. I got to put my auditor hat on ad say, why is the scene not clicking? And this is hardbecause a lot of writers were very prideful. If we didn't think we were awesome at story telling, we probably wouldn't try doing that's al right, we think we're good. But for me, perposonallyf if if a chapteror scene is not clickin first, if i don't write chapters. For me, it's usually too light. For steve, steve's the answeris, i gon t make it darker, which o man, for me. Steve os