Is This Another Example for This?

With things like really showing us the guts of who a character is, we don't want to leave all of that open to interpretation. It also creates a much more vivid image, yes? Rather than if we just say that they're happy. Now i have to sort of just a guess what that will yet. So you guys can guess which is which here. First version. No, thanks. I can do it myself. James shoved my hand away, scowling. Why won't you ever let anyone help you? You think you're so indestructible, so above everyone else. Well, i'm sick of it. But i won't tell because because it's telling