What's a Focus Sentence?

A focus sentence is a format that allows you to slot in elements of the story. Rob rosenthal, the teacher at the transom workshop, uses one he found in a book by tod maffin. It goes like this, someone does something because, but let's go over that again. Lily blank wants ta farm on the eoin oe vineyard. Thisis but it's relly, hurt by land. Here's jessica kiddam's first stab at a focus sentence.