Mc Guffin of the Dagger

I found that mc guffin of the dagger felt so cheesy and so ilove it. I'd like, for example, if there was a scalpo match a d and i think that'ld be brilliant. And this movie misses a lot of opportunities to do things more efficiently,. add a extra meaning to a shot, at an extra moment. On every time, instead of being one fuck and cut, they take like six cuts to bring us into that time. You can have it, but don't make it a seven minute scene. Make it a 30 second scene. Have him walk through surety ty sand. Convey the information. Have a moment, have a beat.